AAAAA I LOVE THE REWRITE! At the very start everything looks so different not only by the background style but also with your writing, because now it feels like the world is more fleshed out and immersive. Especially with the little tidbits about how humans react towards the Old Town. I really love the Codex part cause it feels very immersive and has additional lore that keeps up with everything but doesn't intrude with the main story. I also love how the MC and their twin sister's relationship and dynamic started to really take attention at the very start, and also how customizable MC has become with the pronouns, little facts about them we can influence, and how much accessories we can add on in MC. And the characters! I don't know if anything's changed but in my opinion they felt more alive, which probably means they've been rewritten to be livelier but I can't tell!! Aaaa I really love it and I loved replaying it, never once thought of how boring or redundant it was, I can't wait to see more!!
Waaaaa!! After the rewrite the characters feel more real! And the flow of the story is AMAZING now!! This is a very big improvement! Hehe, I love it >:3
Even after the rewrite, L and S somehow still manage to have my whole heart. I very much like how immersive this game is, and I continue to wait with bated breath for what comes next! :)
Ive played many text based story games, but none have pulled me into the story as much as this one. Its written well, the characters are unique and likeable, the customization is diverse and the choices finally make sense, unlike most other games.
I feel like i am actually able to lose someone or something, i dont think ive ever cared about a fictional sibling like this before.
The story line is intruiging and exciting, there are no boring breaks where nothing happens. It always leaves you hoping for more and more, to find out just what could happen next. What is happening? Why is there a curse in the first place? will our sister be alright? is there something deeper, more ominous lurking and waiting for us? why are we told to ´awaken´? When will i see our dog again? These are the questions that have been haunting me the entire day.
While i like that the rom dialogue options are pointed out, i sometimes couldnt choose between choosing them or choosing what i would actually want to do. For example, while we are numb, i really tried to have it stay that way but just couldnt because i felt like i would miss something if i didnt choose the other options.
Overall i am very intruiged and excited to see what comes next! Amazing work.
I just wanted to say, the story (on the current moment of the demo) left me speechless and made me genuinely feel for characters, i've grown fond of pretty much every character in the current story (and fell in love in a couple of them ;) )
Аnd this is the first game to introduce me to this kind of novels, now being my favorite piece of media, thank you very much for your incredible story and characters, i love it!
Аlso it introduced me to perfect pronouns that i didn't know existed, and now i'm using e/em/eir!! ^^
yes! I'm currently most of the way through reworking the first 3 chapters, but Speaker is still very much being worked on! I make regular progress reports on tumblr as well :D
"...and hey, it's better than working retail." - As someone who worked in retail for years...you're not wrong. I hate you (in a good way), but can't argue that.
This is absolutely amazing and I am so in love with this game already! I love that we have a twin sister, it's very nice to have another character that has such a close bond with the mc and knows what we're going through. I am already immensely attached to her and will be devastated if anything happens to her. I also love Sebastian and Liam, they have my whole heart and that one scene with them standing protectively on either side of the mc made me think of them as the mc's guard dogs, haha!
I am brimming with excitement for what comes next. :)
Thank you so much for making this, it's really amazing! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned your story in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1
Liam is probably one of my favourite characters in any of the interactive fiction on this site, excellent character development! I cannot wait until the next part is released, don't overwork yourself though :]
Oh and i also love how you incorporated a few languages into one of the parts, I especially enjoyed seeing the welsh language as I believe it is a language that many overlook when writing stories like this :]
It's so amazingly written especially the characters, I love interacting with them and my heart goes crazy whenever I go out of my way to pursue one of the romanceable targets, I'm really glad there's an option for romance and platonic options, I'm really glad I can play this and I'm excited to see what's in store next!
Love it so far. And honestly has some of the most customization for the MC that I've see in an IF. Amazingly done and I can already tell that even though Liam is my main route I'm going for, I'm going to be replaying it for all the LIs routes.
This has to be one of the best things I've played/read! The story and the choices along with it are very interesting. I also really like how this is a interactive story making it more engaging!! Keep up the good work <3 :D
I was really looking forward to playing this game, but it won't let me click any of the choices for the dog's name and I'm stuck at this same spot. Restarted my computer and everything. Kinda bummed :/
Okay, this may be weird, but have you tried clicking directly on the name and not on the box around it? If you go through the first choice, then it should work. (This isn't my game. I've just played it a lot.)
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I need more of this IF! Li's route is ❤️❤️❤️.
I'm looking forward the next chapter! 😍😍😍
excited to play the rewrite!!! <33
is this phone compatible
yea
AAAAA I LOVE THE REWRITE! At the very start everything looks so different not only by the background style but also with your writing, because now it feels like the world is more fleshed out and immersive. Especially with the little tidbits about how humans react towards the Old Town. I really love the Codex part cause it feels very immersive and has additional lore that keeps up with everything but doesn't intrude with the main story. I also love how the MC and their twin sister's relationship and dynamic started to really take attention at the very start, and also how customizable MC has become with the pronouns, little facts about them we can influence, and how much accessories we can add on in MC. And the characters! I don't know if anything's changed but in my opinion they felt more alive, which probably means they've been rewritten to be livelier but I can't tell!! Aaaa I really love it and I loved replaying it, never once thought of how boring or redundant it was, I can't wait to see more!!
OMG I AM SO EXCITED TO PLAY THE REWRITE AHHHHHH
Waaaaa!! After the rewrite the characters feel more real! And the flow of the story is AMAZING now!! This is a very big improvement! Hehe, I love it >:3
Even after the rewrite, L and S somehow still manage to have my whole heart. I very much like how immersive this game is, and I continue to wait with bated breath for what comes next! :)
This has to be my favourite one so far.
Ive played many text based story games, but none have pulled me into the story as much as this one. Its written well, the characters are unique and likeable, the customization is diverse and the choices finally make sense, unlike most other games.
I feel like i am actually able to lose someone or something, i dont think ive ever cared about a fictional sibling like this before.
The story line is intruiging and exciting, there are no boring breaks where nothing happens. It always leaves you hoping for more and more, to find out just what could happen next. What is happening? Why is there a curse in the first place? will our sister be alright? is there something deeper, more ominous lurking and waiting for us? why are we told to ´awaken´? When will i see our dog again? These are the questions that have been haunting me the entire day.
While i like that the rom dialogue options are pointed out, i sometimes couldnt choose between choosing them or choosing what i would actually want to do. For example, while we are numb, i really tried to have it stay that way but just couldnt because i felt like i would miss something if i didnt choose the other options.
Overall i am very intruiged and excited to see what comes next! Amazing work.
the characters are all written out so well. i'll now be waiting for your updates. keep up the good work!
I just wanted to say, the story (on the current moment of the demo) left me speechless and made me genuinely feel for characters, i've grown fond of pretty much every character in the current story (and fell in love in a couple of them ;) )
Аnd this is the first game to introduce me to this kind of novels, now being my favorite piece of media, thank you very much for your incredible story and characters, i love it!
Аlso it introduced me to perfect pronouns that i didn't know existed, and now i'm using e/em/eir!! ^^
Also, the irony
Detective: said to be a (kind of) cold character
(and i kinda assumed at first that he has Gavin Reed's meanie vibe)
and literally me the rest of the game:
*screams and feels for Sebastian, feeling like he's the most warm and gentle man i know*
is it possible to have a more silent mc or no? I love the IF so far! im just curious
More?!? This is still being worked on right?
yes! I'm currently most of the way through reworking the first 3 chapters, but Speaker is still very much being worked on! I make regular progress reports on tumblr as well :D
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UUUGHH this is an absolute master-piece
I owe whoever made this a drink a bank and my devotion for good measure
in short I LOVE YOU!!
i'm obsessed with this game??? it's so freaking good! the lore and the characters are so interesting too, i'm in love with sebastian alreadyyy
Good Boi Chekup: Getting relationship tab [MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS THE FARTHER YOU GO]
"...and hey, it's better than working retail." - As someone who worked in retail for years...you're not wrong. I hate you (in a good way), but can't argue that.
I LOVE THIS GAME SO MUCH UICYUUXFUSFGYS
Freaking awesome..Thank you for this masterpiece
AHHHHH YAY. So happy to see you again. :))
this is phenomenal!!! i love it :D
I love this game so much!!!!!
Thanks for your hard work and dedication to this story💕
it's not letting me run the game :( i'm on a windows 11 laptop, if that matters?
when i click on it, it only displays an error page
maybe switch browsers? or devices if it still doesn't work
idk thats just what i need to do usually if a game doesn't run for me
This is absolutely amazing and I am so in love with this game already! I love that we have a twin sister, it's very nice to have another character that has such a close bond with the mc and knows what we're going through. I am already immensely attached to her and will be devastated if anything happens to her. I also love Sebastian and Liam, they have my whole heart and that one scene with them standing protectively on either side of the mc made me think of them as the mc's guard dogs, haha!
I am brimming with excitement for what comes next. :)
I love this game so much Sebastion and Liam have my whole heart. I will continue to come back and check for updates. :)
I do not think the sister will be a Love interest, although I am not the dev.
So Liam and Sebastian can both be romanced in a poly?
that would be AMAAZIINGG ugh
From the looks of the game writing, they can be! I know that's the route I have my heart set on. :)
I love the bonds between the mc and their twin.
please this is so interesting. i love all the characters and the generally the whole story so far. i can't wait for more!
i'm not crying over found family vibes and road trips; i would never (but also this is incredible thanks for writing it and sharing it)
Thank you so much for making this, it's really amazing! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned your story in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1
Liam is probably one of my favourite characters in any of the interactive fiction on this site, excellent character development! I cannot wait until the next part is released, don't overwork yourself though :]
Oh and i also love how you incorporated a few languages into one of the parts, I especially enjoyed seeing the welsh language as I believe it is a language that many overlook when writing stories like this :]
It's so amazingly written especially the characters, I love interacting with them and my heart goes crazy whenever I go out of my way to pursue one of the romanceable targets, I'm really glad there's an option for romance and platonic options, I'm really glad I can play this and I'm excited to see what's in store next!
Can you only play as a girl?
You can play as anything, you get to select your pronouns by clicking on the underlined bit in the first few paragraphs
I need a Sebastian in my life 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Love it so far. And honestly has some of the most customization for the MC that I've see in an IF.
Amazingly done and I can already tell that even though Liam is my main route I'm going for, I'm going to be replaying it for all the LIs routes.
This has to be one of the best things I've played/read! The story and the choices along with it are very interesting. I also really like how this is a interactive story making it more engaging!! Keep up the good work <3 :D
I was really looking forward to playing this game, but it won't let me click any of the choices for the dog's name and I'm stuck at this same spot. Restarted my computer and everything. Kinda bummed :/
Have you tried playing it on your phone?
I've always played it on mine and it works perfectly!
Okay, this may be weird, but have you tried clicking directly on the name and not on the box around it? If you go through the first choice, then it should work. (This isn't my game. I've just played it a lot.)
hey it worked!!
Yay! I had this problem at first too. Glad you got it working!